salamo 3alukum i'm new here and my friend told me abt this gorgeous forum

i write english pomes so i thought abt sharing it with u and know ur openions hope u like it and thnx for reading
Last beat.
Lup dup…Lup dup
My heart beat stopped.
I woke up and found
Many people gathering around
It seems that I am dead
They are all crying loud
Oh
God!
I'm in a great perdition
No more chances
Too late for submission
My life is full of sins
So how am I going to stand between your
Hands?
How am I going to face
You?
If I took my book with my left hand?
How did I keep talking to my friends?
And forget to pray the dawn
None of my friends is with me now
I am dead and all alone.
How can I be such a fool?
And didn't realize everything
You gave to me
How can I be so cruel?
And don't thank
You for what
You did to me
Wish I could turn back time
And do my best to go to heaven
It's too late to regret
But...can I still be forgiven?
Lup dup…Lup dup...
My heart beats again
Thanks
God it was just a dream
So please forgive my sins
My
Merciful Lord
Thank
You for
Your bless
Thank
You for giving me another chance
And reminding me of death.