an english poem :)

[نور الشمس]

salamo 3alukum i'm new here and my friend told me abt this gorgeous forum i write english pomes so i thought abt sharing it with u and know ur openions hope u like it and thnx for reading




Last beat.

Lup dup…Lup dup
My heart beat stopped.
I woke up and found
Many people gathering around
It seems that I am dead
They are all crying loud
Oh God!
I'm in a great perdition
No more chances
Too late for submission
My life is full of sins
So how am I going to stand between your Hands?
How am I going to face You?
If I took my book with my left hand?
How did I keep talking to my friends?
And forget to pray the dawn
None of my friends is with me now
I am dead and all alone.
How can I be such a fool?
And didn't realize everything You gave to me
How can I be so cruel?
And don't thank You for what You did to me
Wish I could turn back time
And do my best to go to heaven
It's too late to regret
But...can I still be forgiven?
Lup dup…Lup dup...
My heart beats again
Thanks God it was just a dream
So please forgive my sins
My Merciful Lord
Thank You for Your bless
Thank You for giving me another chance
And reminding me of death.

[شروق الاجزجي]

aslam 3likom
ahlaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan ya shams
im so happy with your lovly poem
you know i like it so much...............nice work dear
may ALLAH reward u the best sweety
and i wanna see your work .................... .in ALLAH

[قطرات الندى]

aslam alikom sister in god"nour ashams"
realy i enjoy reading every word in this poem
may allah bless you
realy good work....go on
and best regards for you
wellcome to our forum to your second home between your brother and sisters in god

[emo]

dear sister nour el shams
this poem is very nice
go on and we will wait all works
may allah reward you

[فتاة الاسلام]

in the name of god
really it is avery nice poem
god bless you
good job my sistre
with all my love in god

[نور الشمس]

thnx alot sisters i never thought of getting any replies tht means alot to me and i'm so happy u liked it God bless u all

[الأفق]

aslam 3likom

realy good work....go on

good job my sister

[شفا]

well i see a new talented one here
i like your poem so much espically the opening
keep going girl
god bless you

[silent whisper]

keep it going sis
nice poem
waiting for ur poems alawys
thanks sis